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OCBZ Intro: Dee Page 1

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DEE'S BACK FOLKS.

Trying a lot of new things here, ah it feels good to take some time and make some comics again.

Lookit, there's a radio tower FOREST.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

-There seems to be major improvements to your paneling and coloring techniques.

-The great use of textures surely adds richness to the comic page.

-The camera angle on the lowest panel is very well selected and the choice of a white BG is really effective.

-The overall panel progression from one panel to the next flows very well and each panel fits well where it's placed.

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I personally don't find any obvious flaws or shortcomings, i'd be nitpicking if a i did ^_^

Overall an excellent page indeed .. is quite well executed and captures the viewers attention about what the character is doing.