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Overall
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Impact
-There seems to be major improvements to your paneling and coloring techniques.
-The great use of textures surely adds richness to the comic page.
-The camera angle on the lowest panel is very well selected and the choice of a white BG is really effective.
-The overall panel progression from one panel to the next flows very well and each panel fits well where it's placed.
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I personally don't find any obvious flaws or shortcomings, i'd be nitpicking if a i did ^_^
Overall an excellent page indeed .. is quite well executed and captures the viewers attention about what the character is doing.