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This is an audition for the RedBall Open which is a tournament held by 
the SDL.
So I would like to improve on my comic making skillz so I would appreciate some constructive critizism
. However some of this was rushed, so try to recognize areas that were rushed and ignore them 
.
This is my favorite page of the audition ^_^
I actually added backgrounds! I did this page first because I wanted to end strongly and knew that the last few pages I did would be rushed...
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the SDL.So I would like to improve on my comic making skillz so I would appreciate some constructive critizism
. However some of this was rushed, so try to recognize areas that were rushed and ignore them .This is my favorite page of the audition ^_^
I actually added backgrounds! I did this page first because I wanted to end strongly and knew that the last few pages I did would be rushed...
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Image size
900x1178px 394.27 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot SD700 IS
Shutter Speed
1/636 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
Date Taken
Feb 28, 2008, 11:39:04 AM
© 2008 - 2024 Khaiya
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Like i've posted before great entry, but the text those lead me astray a bit. I confused with what happened when she had her first dual and her feelings about. Still the visual supported it and clear everything up. I think you should keep the visual and the text at the same key so that your future entries have more impact.
Still awsome 
Still awsome